Oh yes, we definitely need to keep going here! I think having Lucy resist would be totally unrealistic and not in character for the horny spirits. They clearly want to violate and dominate every part of her body, both physically and mentally/emotionally. Continuing on with graphically violent rape scenes is exactly what this story needs - please don't hold back on the depravity!! Also, I like using poetic language to describe the ectoplasmic entities assaulting Lucy. Their cold essence penetrating her skin, reshaping her flesh and mind so she becomes a vessel for their pleasure.

I can't believe this is actually happening, thought Lucy as she felt the ghost's presence enter her body through her mouth. Its slimy appendage slithered down her throat, choking her as she tried to scream for help. But nobody could see or hear her distress - she was just another passenger on the crowded train, sitting quietly with her head tilted back against the window. Nobody noticed the tears streaming down her face or the way her hands clawed uselessly at the air in front of her.