Thanks for your comment, it's one of my first ones and I'm open to criticism,.And the image is not mine, it was taken from the internet

The image of Alex has a face that makes him/her extremely like a girl. He/she blushes in the wrong spot for a boy, the face doesn't have the ridges that the skull of a male has. Also, the background is off, with the door frames at the bottom being openings, yet at the top being part of the wall. Additionally, the hips of the person are to wide for a boy. Other than that, th initial message has trouble describing him or her as a boy, apart from other languages issues in that message. I also don't see why Alex would be there in a sports outfit, regardless of gender. Not an absolute loss, but get someone to get a better image, and have someone check the text.